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Re: Demi-God Camp?
AH! The old storybook field... used to be quite the storybook man back in the day... lol. This is right up my alley. Please grant me the chance to jump ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Three Faced Cat
Well... that gave me chills. I can relate very heavily on this story; it is almost scary. The dark visualization grabbed me, and I felt like I was there again, ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: the depths
sadly, after this poem, I could never seem to write poetry again--not trying to be dramatic or anything.
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: the depths
I keep swimming in this blackened water deeper than hell, currents stronger than pain, but I tire. My mind cries for rest, My body only obeys, My soul holds to ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: It is Quiet Here
I really like the free flow of the poem. It is a very mature, surrealistic poem, and I have to admit I was a bit surprised by your age. The ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: The Three Vengeful Dwarves
how long is has been since this website... ANYWAY!!! I must agree with LxnderSpeck. While the story concept itself, and the message behind it, is an entertaining idea, it is ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: The Chandra
Coden's cottage was placed slightly farther from the rest. Known for its "fiery outbreaks" the wooden pillars that had hedl the other cottages up had been safely reinforced with a ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: The Chandra
(is it too late to join? I am SO UP FOR THIS!!!) Name:Coden Desaret age: 16 race: human status: Trainee gift: manipulation of fire and conjuring of it (you know ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Cry of The fallen swords
Coden Desaret climbed slowly through the foilage. His body moved gracefully through branches, barely shifting the dew that had settled on the leaves. Over his shoulder a large white wolf ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Cry of The fallen swords
Oh how i miss young writers society... used to love storybooks. Now i make my return lol. name: Coden Desaret race: Human (gotta have one somewhere) nation: Brettonnia class: warrior/ ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Prologue of Unnamed Story
alright quick notes to this.... there was a large, wooden wardrobe with all the baby's clothes in it. There was a large, wooden hamper for all the babies’ toys to ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Lost Paradise
will join soon,,,, this sounds a lot like DOT HACK....
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Helio
Coden's eyes stayed locked with the young woman's. He had barely any control of his lost mind, but he wasn't about to show that. He gingerly scooped her up in ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Alternate Ending
defintiely has some heavy potential. One i have to say besides the nevelle deal, everyone had no emotion while heromoine was just a giant crying machine. You need to put ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
actually im 6'2", broad shouldered, but i am bubbly and smily. unfortunately not asian XD
Jun 24, 2008
