dante93

I found this poem excellent. It rivals my own poetry in craft. Beautifully written, and enlightening. I have not read something like that on here in a long time (I ...

I didn't like this poem. It wasn't that it was too heavy as you say. It was just weird. I think this needs heavy editing. Scream… Not to be heard. ...

I actually enjoyed this poem, not because of the topic, but how you wrote it. It was beautifully crafted. I felt the emotions, the sorrow, the anger--everything that this poem ...

I would have to say this poem was not that great. First, because of the title. American Idol is a joke, the voting is rigged somehow because the best singers ...

I see several grammatical errors in this poem as well as some places where the flow could be better. First: I’ve lied to myself. We all do. We all pretend ...

Thanks. I just want to thank everyone for reviewing this, even though I wrote it a few years back. I just wanted to see what people thought of the 13 ...

Thanks people of Earth. This was a story I wrote about a four years ago. Found it a couple weeks ago and just kinda threw it on here. Thanks again ...

I understand the grammar if you speak of commas and such, but if it was in dialog it was intentional.

Why can't I be cruel? It's so much fun. Anyway I'm not going to be cruel because I rather enjoyed this poem. Perhaps it is because I know that feeling ...

First, i must say I did not like this poem. To me this does not not even seem like a poem, simply a statement of fact, especially towards the end. ...

He ran across the dirty back streets of his hometown, streets filled with dark alleyways and dimly lit street lights. He ran from another figure chasing him, one who wore ...

The streets were barren as I ran, cold, fearful, and oblivious to my surroundings. My thoughts were frantic, livid, racing as I did. Every fiber of my being seemed to ...

I somewhat enjoyed this poem. As said before your voice is interesting, but overall I didn't really find this poem all to amazing. I know you said you just threw ...

I did not really like this poem very much. It seems very bland. The idea is okay, but the way it is written is just...eh. That's all I can say ...

I found this poem particularly amusing. It was well written and had nice structure and speaks a terrifying truth, which is, literature is becoming a dying art. I completely agree ...