dante93

This poem was great. I know some people will say that description is vague as above, but I felt the meaning, and understood it perfectly. Not all poetry is about ...

This poem didn't seem very good to me. I thought it was a little childish actually. I'm sorry if that offends you, but this poem's tone seems like a just ...

In me there is a beast, a monster, a creature with but one goal, to destroy. For years I've battled this beast, but for what? For good? For righteousness? Battling ...

Here's a few suggestions on a title: I, The Lost One , Where Has My Life Gone , Love, Life, and my Misery , Heart: Lost From Me . I ...

I thought this poem was okay. It was written in a way easy to understand, but it lacked the structure which makes a poem great. It seemed to me the ...

This poem was good overall, but there were some errors with punctuation and so forth. I can't tell you how you will do it, but a suggestion that I have ...

My username you can see obviously, dante93. But a lot of people don't why I chose that as my username, or they don't care, but I figure I might as ...

Thank you all. Sadly this did come from personal experience. Sad. True. All the above. Twisted life, though, provides for good poetry and writing. Also after I originally wrote this ...

Unlike the other comments I have read I did not love this poem. I thought it was okay, but the emotion,to me, in the poem was a bit lacking. It ...

Ha this poem made me laugh, but in a good way. Writing about writer's block is a very ironic topic, but the way you write it pulls off both the ...

How can I go on? Tell me this? Tell me how I can move forward after this? After my life has been utterly destroyed. After everything has crumbled. After all ...

I agree with the above comment. This poem cannot be salvaged at all. It is one of those that reeks of teenage angst. The smell is putrid and overbearing. This ...

I found this poem very funny, but in a good way. What I would suggest you do is not keep it as one single stanza. This poem would flow better ...

This poem reminds me of the Existentialist movement. I enjoyed the poem as it was. I don't think you should change anything with this because otherwise the message might change. ...

This poem was excellent. It was a little weird as you said, but overall it was interesting. I like the use of imagery, the aspects of a drifter, a drinker--someone ...