dante93

Why has this happened to me? This change, this metamorphosis into a monster. Once I was happy, Once I frolicked through the meadows and felt the wind on my face ...

This was a good poem, dark, but good. It had a weird flow, but I could deal with it. The message was pretty clear, and it was overall well written. ...

Something bothers me about this poem as well. It seems as though it is more surreal than it should be. From the first stanza to the second the transition seems ...

Thank you everyone. I will be posting more soon.

First, I am sure many of you who read this know about my friend who recently died because of kidney failure. This poem was one of many we co-authored together. ...

this was hilarious! I liked it. Funny satire.

I liked this poem because I can relate. I think we've all been there, but this: Everything in between is pointless. Wasted efforts. This thought has broken me, Torn up ...

I enjoyed this poem. It has sorrow, and hope at the same time. It wasn't perfect, but for your first post on here that was pretty good. Keep writing. Also ...

This poem was good. Sounded like my dreams. There, however, is a Poet's land, our minds. That is the true land in which we all live in, writers that is. ...

I would also like to thank everyone for their support and reviews. It means a lot to me getting criticism from other writers. It has helped me improve tremendously.

This poem was good. I liked the use of language and imagery here. I usually say something about punctuation because many people overlook that, but this poem, even though there ...

You should probably lock this topic because you are getting only negative reviews. And FYI i didn't say you were a childish writer, I said and I quote : This ...

Than you. I really appreciate it.

Thank you friend. I really appreciate it.

Well, it is a good poem, but I cannot comment further without getting into a religious debate. It is well written. Good Job. But I'm an Atheist, so for the ...