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to the person right above me. A poem is meant to be a certain way so reader reacts a certain way. In this poem, the length is mean to make ...

To the guy who asked, the person in this poem is none of the things you stated. This person is an extension of me, of who I am and what ...

Ha. This poem made me laugh, but in a good way. To me this poem was light-hearted, and playful, yet very well written. I understand the frustration with names and ...

I enjoyed this poem. It had everything a poem should have. It had imagery. It had strong emotion, and was solid all through out. The length fit the theme, and ...

I did not really like this poem. It is actually kind of comical to me. Not theme mind you, but the delivery. It sounds to me like there is nothing ...

This poem was interesting, though the delivery was a bit so-so. As said before I understand the idea, but it seems as though the idea was not expanded enough. I ...

I agree with StoryWeaver. This poem seemed a bit to angst ridden for me. It also seemed a but vague. It evoked some weird emotions and overall was somewhat confusing. ...

I thought this poem was okay. I can definitely relate to it, but the language and they way it is set up seems a bit choppy and weird throughout the ...

This is a good poem. The only thing is, the "innocent" usually aren't. And they usually go for the bad ones. I would know from experience. I am damaged, tainted, ...

Thanks for the comment. By the way I don't know if you meant to say epoem or not, but since it's an epoem, am I am epoet? I'll change the ...

Chaos ensues as I run from my destiny, as I hide from what I truly am, a monster. I breathe, I look, I run, then hide. The the beast finds ...

First, thanks for the comments. Next, this poem wasn't really for everyone else. It was more for me, for me to look at. i appreciate the comments, I really do, ...

Here I sit as your last breath has been taken. Gone are the days filled with joy, Gone are the days when you would console me, when we were both ...

I love the irony in this poem! Your eyes are opened, but you are a willing slave. Hilarious! Absolutely hilarious. It is sad too, but it is funny. The poem ...

Thanks. He would appreciate those comments.