dante93

Tortured, Caged, Broken. These define me. What I am, Who I am. These three words are my life. Tortured: Chained, Burned, Beaten. Transformed into the monster I am today. Caged: ...

Funny thing is, I'm already seeing one.

I did not like this poem at all. It was jumbled, and really made no sense to me. The title is Future, but you do not really get that picture ...

I actually thought this poem was good. At first I hated it, I'll admit, but by the end I could see the depth in this poem. Yes the theme is ...

It has been a while since I have posted here. Kind of odd now that I think about it. But this is a poem I wrote about a week ago. ...

Thank you all. Appreciate the support.

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I disagree with fining someone for cutting classes. Yes, it is wrong to cut class, but nothing such as paying a fine should be imposed on students. It puts a ...

I didn't quite understand this poem, because it seems to me like it is a bunch of gibberish. No offense. I'd re-write this, unless that is what you were intending.

I actually enjoyed this piece of poetry. It was very well written, other than no punctuation, but I found that my mind naturally created how it needed to be interpreted. ...

First, the title of the poem does not match the poem itself. Next this poem was not that great. Even for a religious poem this seems a bit too "Hallelujah! ...

Images of violent acts consume my mind. Blood runs as a river across the streets. Bodies lay twisted and mutilated as I walk among them. What is this but a ...

Haha you're welcome.

Chapter I: Broken Dream I woke from a dark sleep, a nightmare of reality, fear and disgrace. Voices swirled around me as I rose, my face showing my fear as ...