dante93

This is indeed one of the better poems I have read. The structure is great, and the meaning is deep, and close to whats left of my heart. I think ...

No one ever loses the talent to write, they are just blocked from ideas. I like this poem for the most part, but some lines did not flow as well ...

I like the poem, but one point is repetitive, the second line i think. Its one of them, but you re-state the thing twice in the same line. I like ...

I wasnt feeling this poem very much. It was to over dramatic, and overplayed. But keep writing.

sorry about that. look at the title, and then read the first line. your supposed to read the first line right after. Its a technique I use.

haha thanks. this how i write though. some poems change gears. it propels a different message.

Of this mundane life. One of anonymity, liberating at first, but becomes a part of the soul as time passes. This life was meant to be lived in light, not ...

I like the layout, but it needs revisions in some areas. Some of the stuff at the beginning is repetitive, and the wording is a bit off. But the overall ...

A question so ingrained, entwined within me it burns. To my core this reality haunts me. How have I live this long with such darkness in my heart? With such ...

Nice short poem. It is simple at first, but contains a very deep meaning. I like it, though one of the above comments is right with the question begin a ...

I just joined because I found this on Google. I guess to start have been writing for 10 years and I love it. I am currently working on poetry aspects ...