dante93

I think this poem is sweet as well, but there is one thing. The last two lines seem out of place. Just don't forget that love is my drug And ...

This poem is cool. I especially like how you put bona fide in bold. Anyway, great poem. Keep writing these types.

Yes it does seem to be written by a zombie. I totally agree, especially given the title. "A Mind's Revenge". Does that not sound like something a zombie would be ...

I agree this poem is great. I would not have changed anything about it either except for one line. "Robed forms wrought in panes of glass loom as" I would ...

It does. I see what your saying with the whole why thing. I looked back at my "revision". I actually deleted the last half of it off, and rewrote it. ...

Thanks. Not out of any disrespect but did you see what I wrote at the bottom. I've worked this poem over since I posted. I'll revise soon. I meant this ...

I look at the soul beneath me broken, bloodied, and beaten. His eyes are like mine, hungry, and unrelenting. The skeleton he is reminds me of days past. Dwelling in ...

I don't need sarcasm on a review.

The wind whips my back as I walk this path. My feet bleed My back bleeds When will this nightmare end? When will this terror I have created come to ...

First of all I said read the divine comedy. You would get a better understanding of what I was trying to say. I had no interest in fully using the ...

Just for the record I was not trying to rhyme.

By the way if you do not understand it, then you should read Dante's Inferno. You guys also need to read deeper. If you did not understand it, there is ...

You hated it. thank you. it is supposed to be sad. and its not emo. I don't get where you guys get that retarded idea from. There is no I ...

Come meet me where the sun shines. where we greet the new day. One filled with so many possibilities. The sun's rays extend to infinite. No darkness is here. Let ...

I love the contrast in the poem. The tone so dark, the imagery showing how destructive lies become even when one tries to speak truth. Good job and keep writing ...