dante93

What chaos we know as life. Every moment spent racing to our deaths. Scurrying like rats through scum. Our culture is one of greed, contempt and utter hatred for all ...

O Catholic Religion how great you are! What love oozes from your veins. Nothing is blind to you, even though those who use logic condemn you. They are wrong I ...

I thought this poem was a bit bland for my taste, but it could be great. I agree with what some of the others said about the abstract imagery. It ...

I agree with Juniper in that this poem does not move the reader very much. I have had this said to me before and it really helped, you have a ...

Thanks to all of you. Some weird stuff has happened to inspire this poem. But yes she does. Ah a tortured soul knows all. anyway thanks again for the comments. ...

thanks. Poem is a bit over dramatic i see. i wrote it at 4 in the morning for a performance I had to do that day. It worked out, but ...

Alone in this life, a fate so cruel An existence so meaningless. With no love, and only one passion how can truly exist? without someone to love, to trust how ...

Thanks for the comments. I did see that cliche. i have fixed and sent to poem to my Aunt, oh and the last part breaking the flow with my, is ...

The Eyes Behold I see a woman whose life should be in ruins, whose body and mind should be torn, mangled and destroyed by her past. Twisted by her life ...

Than you. Yeah some people are still building a shed near my house, so I haven't had time to look back at this, but i will soon and I will ...

I like this poem. Granted it seems to be lyrics to a songs I rather enjoy it. I have felt that desire, that, and longing to have someone, to hold ...

I fall into a world that doesn’t want to catch me It blackens as it fades away Leaving just traces of hope and love Speaking of words no one wants ...

I am the essence of darkness, but also of light. I am the giver of life, and the destroyer of worlds. I know love and hate, remorse and disdain. I ...

I see what the other two were talking about here. The poem overall is great, but there are a few words that need to be looked at such as cries ...

Thanks Juniper for your comment. I am reworking this poem right now actually. I did not get a chance to look at it last night, but I will repost later ...