dante93

I agree with Kit, this poem was interesting, but seemed to lack a bit of flow. I enjoyed the whole idea, but you must expand on this idea more. Make ...

I agree with the above review, even though I too already reviewed this, but to me it seemed a bit abrupt. If it is what is meant to be the ...

This poem was interesting, and I can relate to it, but the specifics that weren't mentioned actually diminish the effectiveness and overall impact of this poem. It was two days ...

I disagree that this poem is pretty good. It is simply there. If it is raw, it is very, very raw. If it is trying to convey the emotions of ...

I agree with the above reviewer, those two lines were a bit confusing, well confusing to most. I understand that the weather around the person in this poem reflects his ...

Just got through getting some answers actually, and figured out a meaning in and of itself by re-reading it when I wasn't doing a thousand things. But, he said to ...

I really did not like this poem. I tried to be optimistic about it, but it was simply immature. The language was a bit off. It did not flow very ...

I liked this one, unlike another short one i just read and commented on. This, this makes sense. It is very short, has a very strong point, and actually makes ...

Okay, I do not mean to sound rude, or want to sound ignorant, but what exactly is this poem supposed to mean? I've read it five times, and have tried ...

This poem makes me think of the Twilight series and how much I hate it. This poem was good, but I could not get the images of all the horrible ...

The poem was supposed to be a bit of a monologue. I'm not going to change much in the poem, but I will look at it again. Thanks for the ...

Mother, May I be so frank As to say shut your mouth? Stop talking, Stop preaching. I don't care what you have to say. You are a hypocrite, a liar, ...

I actually really liked this poem, which is unusual because most poems have such a whinny tone. The language in this poem was good. The execution was superb, and the ...

I want the Gold, first of all. Second the poem was decent, but it needs a bit more elaboration. I believe poems that deal with the earth, greed, and our ...

This poem was honestly boring. A bit stale for my taste, and very repetitive. If that is was what you were going for good job, but I did not like ...