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This seems like a broken poem, which fuels its meaning. I like it. I understood it.

First, before anyone reads this poem I would like to take a moment to dedicate this to my uncle who killed himself last year after thirty years of loneliness and ...

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I agree with LastPaladin. Not to say that this idea is not a good one, but the way it is presented has no substance. It is like a weak speech ...

delmarria you have not made an enemy of me. I quite enjoy good criticism (criticism that's well placed and has a good point). But the whole idea of our world ...

Thanks for the comment. I find the ending is appropriate though. And yes I guess it is like a holding candy in front of a starving baby. I really appreciate ...

What I see through my eyes is a world gone mad. Horror, bloodshed, murder, rape. Our morality has vanished. Our vision of life is corrupted. Through these eyes I see ...

A sweet embrace is silence. Utter nothingness surrounding my soul would be bliss. No other person, no other voice only myself in a void, in a reality where time is ...

Dread Father's greeting. Dread Father's blessing. We welcome you to our home. Our ranks are secret, sacred as we descend to darkness As we willfully leave this world. We are ...

On some level I agree with Explosive_Pen, but this is a poem. It is a simple poem driven by pure hatred and emotion, but a poem nonetheless. It is simple ...

It has been a while since I have been on here because I have been working on getting my novel published, but this is a poem I wrote recently about ...

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I agree with the others. I can see what you were trying to say, but the punctuation needs to be looked at some. In some ways this poem seems like ...

Thanks. This was actually what I was originally going to do for my talent show, but they said it was too dark. They loved it though. You should have seen ...

Thanks guys. I needed as pick me up after a shitty day at work. Yes I was baptized Catholic, but I am an atheist now, and I shall read it ...