dante93

I enjoyed this poem very much just one mistake. mysery is misspelled. should me misery. Good job. Good poem. good idea. It does make people think. I quite enjoy morbid ...

I am writing this on my own poem for no reason.

I agree with the above. The poem overall is good, but the inconsistent rhyming throws the poem off a bit and weakens some of the great things about. Overall it ...

I liked this poem somewhat, but agreeing with other comments the line format is a bit weird and stops the natural flow of the poem. It made me think it ...

I think the idea for this poem was good, but the execution of it was mundane. The main for that is what seems to be a lack of emotion. There ...

This poem was amusing, but really very weak. I see in it no imagery that stands out, nor anything particularly great about it. Feathers, fur, hoofs, feelers, red, blue, purple, ...

I think the other reviews have already covered what needs to be revised and changed, but as a not the use of more periods in the first stanza would make ...

I will tell him that. I think this was his fourth poem, but he wanted me to post it. I'm sure he'll appreciate the comments.

With love lost I move forward and look back. I shed no tears as my heart is crushed and healed. This last love is the last and the first. It ...

I agree with bookworm. This poem was very interesting in the way it was presented and the idea was very intricate and eerie. Not a particularly long poem, but to ...

Thanks. I know all to well what pain is, but I wrote this as I had a flashback of my past. It's not that I am sad. I have done ...

I write this in misery thinking of you, drinking, smoking, crying, lying here broken in this empty room. I write this as my life slips away, as my mind fades, ...

I had deep connection to this poem because as I read I remembered what it was like moving from Italy to America. This poem captures in a very unique and ...

There she stands staring at the wide, vast sea Her heart burning for a man who has left this world. Here I stand, in the shadows behind her, watching tears ...

I see what you mean when you say the rhythm is not very strong, but I see the insight and potential of this poem. It seems a bit informal to ...