dante93

This is an odd poem. I thought at some parts it was decent, but at others it just didn't seem right. To start Took longer than I expected, but it ...

I simply stumbled across yhis poem as I was scrolling odwn the page and liked the title. Anyway what I am going to say has been said before. This poem ...

I thoroughy enjoyed this poem. Its two contrasting parts speaking of the same being flow in a wa that makes the poem great. The first part hatred, anger, sorrow, really ...

Thanks for the comment. Sorry if there wasn't more clarity, but this was something that was just pounding in my head and I had to get it out. I imagined ...

I am in agreement with above comments. This is a very powerful poem, filled with sorrow and biting truth. I know that exact feeling, and I do disagree with your ...

And you, and you, and you my friend? You too betray me? You too stab me? My greatest friend now my greatest enemy I bleed for I have nothing left. ...

Thanks. Yes it is sad that most art comes from pain, but without what we do there would be no hope. Our pain is the hope for the future. Our ...

The symphony that was his soul has been shattered, crushed utterly as now falls into oblivion. The ones he loved destroyed him. The ones he trusted betrayed him. His blissful ...

Haha nicolerosebieber said speechless, get it? Haha. Anyway great poem, reminds me of many of mine, deep, dark, emotional, complex, yet simple. But simple in a way that creates new ...

Thanks for the review. I put orange in the wrong place. I just looked back at it and changed to wording so it flows again.

Ah yes the quintessential angst ridden poem filled with hatred and that rhetorical answer the person asking does not want to know. I remember those poems. Anyway this poem was ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It was an explosion of emotion and imagery that evoked not only the haunting desire for peace, but savagery, and dehumanization, but at the same ...

I agree that the rhyme scheme is a bit off and throws the poem off a bit, but overall I saw the emotion and passion that went into this work. ...

I agree with others. This poem is very short, but it calls for the reader wonder, and ponder what became of the person, how they truly felt, and what really ...

I concur. It is a short piece, but sometimes those pieces make us feel the greatest. Those pieces invoke in us memories from our past ranging from things lost to ...