danipower0204

Fun! A little dissappointing in the end, though. The whole "thinking about"...doesn't really work well, make it more relevant. I know you're trying to be random, but still. And also, ...

Thanks for the responses guys! Really appreciate it!

Nice! I enjoyed this. When I think about mermaids, I don't think about the kiddy, silly creations, but the dark, seductive, evil killer mermaids. 'Tis true. I just wish this ...

OK, I'll get straight to my opinion. This didn't really feel like a poem. Yes poetry is very diverse and free, but this felt more like something you would actually ...

Friggely, fibbely, fubbly woo, At this time I feel like, phew! 'Tis too hot to walk and talk, And too hot to even fret. Lo, behold, the world has brought ...

Never say 'I Love You' If you really do not care. Never talk about having feelings, If they aren't truly there! Never hold my hand If you're just gonna break ...

Thanks so much guys. It really means a lot to me. You're making me want to write again!

Thank you so much for your wonderful replies. I don't frequent this place much as of late, but you guys are turning the tide!

Thanks for the feedback guys!

If I were a leather jacket, Would you wear my wrinkly skin? Would you laugh with satisfaction, And forget my suffering? If I were a pair of shoes, My hair, ...

Writing is a way of seeing things A way to uncover the invisible glaze That the world has coated you with Shielding you from seeing the truth Because, writing is ...

Looking down from a starry sky, I see the darkest depths of night that brings about the blacks and whites that can't be seen otherwise. This line is an example ...

Thanks for your comments, guys!

There are those days where it may seem I could sit back, relax, and just day-dream, Then kick my feet up to the desk, And reminisce; “I should not rest”. ...

Thanks for the comments and reviews! Will take everything into consideration! As for extending the poem, no can do, as it is an acrostic (first letter of every line downwards ...