danipower0204

Thanks a lot for the reviews! I cannot change the first word of every line, as it is an acrostic, but I will work on the flow!

Silence only, Embracing death. No opinions, never firing up my cannons, Shooting out my bullets, Under suppression of pleasing others So that I am yearned by them, Oppressing my own ...

Thanks for all the great responses guys! Really appreciate it!

A rock to fill the vacancy is a shape shifter bec ause the rock will be a different shape at different times, depending on climate and tide. I kind of ...

Welcome!!!

There once lived a Tiny Heart, as tiny as tiny can be. Hidden amidst the crowd, she was often hard to see. She had many Hearts, who were her friends, ...

Press provides powerful presence. Perhaps passion, and peace lost to propaganda. Probably: people protest what they can't possess or process. I agree. Patterns prove promising process es of the Past ...

It doesn't matter how hearts are cold with all my bad cards I did never fold My friend asked if love she, but I've never answered with a me It ...

She laughs and giggles at my Southern drawl--- thick from drink, pronounced and rolling slowly off the tongue. Those two last lines - I don't get them. What is rolling ...

Deceiving eyes deceitful lies, What’s left of ourselves is nothing more than our imagination. We pleaded with each other not to walk away, But when the words came out I ...

Vile, venomous life, spun Into a million and one dead ends, The truth to all the Answers are hidden in a web That hangs high in the heavens, Ethereal, eternal, ...

I though I loved you, but you hurt me, I tried to love you and, all you gave me was pain, you made me happy for awhile, but messed it ...

Great poem, I really enjoyed it. Even though I'm not religious, I like the ethereal quality to this poem. You illustrate "Good" and "Bad" quite well here, and how our ...

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it a lot!

This is a part of my (ongoing) fantasy world of Entéa - here you witness the beginning of the creation of the world by the God Cythos. Cythos: Onto Angels ...