danipower0204

Don't really know what I was doing with this, just got inspired to write something. Hope you like it. Imagine A world of bloody flames Where trees have smiles as ...

Wonderful imagery here. Absolutely wonderful. I wish I were as great as you with imagery - really. I agree with Vball - it takes me into another world, which is ...

The things I like about this poem - it's simple and easy to read, the rhythm is OK, and the structure - it looks nice. However - you're lacking a ...

OK - at first - and pretty much up until the last bit, I thought this poem was about love. Especially in the bits: Fresh and red, such Brilliant art, ...

I thought you were on my side, I thought you 'd chosen me, Over healing something, That point is lost at sea. I thought you'd understand, My relation to another- ...

Simple, short. Good enough in my opinion. I wish it were a little more specific - it is VERY broad, and quite random in my opinion. I don't really see ...

One by one Your neighbors, classmates, friends, and family, And people who never saw you there Buckle their seat belts And close the door. As the oxygen And cheap light ...

I always knew you would be the one To catch me when I fall. As said above - cliche. You had me all along Wrapped around your finger. As said ...

I'm not sure what to make of this. It's a tragic story, told in a very light-hearted fashion. Also, you don't really use a lot of imagery...I mean that you're ...

She tells me--No, she yells, letting every frozen tear roll out her mouth. And she lets them shatter at my feet. But I still listen when she tells me. I ...

To be the droplet of water , descending from a gull’s wing falling, splitting, time abating Silvery moonlight, glittering through the rain serenity reaches the night once again. Love this ...

Thanks for the reviews guys. Really appreciate them

There's nothing to be reviewed here. It hit me like a rock on my chest. And those are the best poems. Good flow, good rhythm, good rhyme, wonderfully tragic story. ...

I loved it. I did. It had a very nice flow in my opinion. I love the wording that you used. I actually don't knows specifically what it was about ...

You may not see it through my screen, That runs the documentary Of one tough rhinoceros boy, Who never sobs and never toys, Who doesn't flee and never flinches, Never ...