danipower0204

Hi there. OK, straight to the point, since it's late. Your someone said before. But that's all. It doesn't really read like a poem. Sure, you have structure, punctuation, all ...

Rhymes wriggle when it's Dani to the Power, Words wiggle when I shake your final hour, Seize your skulls, it's gonna get surreal, My words liquify your brains with their ...

This is out of a real moment in my life. Every word, metaphor and anything else is true. Happened around 6 years ago. The night grinned doom with pleasure. It ...

Thanks for the replies guys!

I saw her, in the driest of deserts, hair wild as a flame in the wind. She stood atop the dune, a queen, staring at the smiling sun that sank ...

So, you've written a very relevant poem. Seeing as no one been very harsh to you til now, I'm sorry that I will, but I'll be constructive. Good spelling, like ...

Thanks for the reviews, I really appreciate them. Desire and ally1212 the first stanza is now changed, and I have also added a stanza, plus the second "infinite" is now ...

So I don't know if such a thread already exists, but if it doesn't it's about time! We all know the famous Haiku Battle thread, and I love it. I ...

Although I'm a a sucker for rhymes, I do agree that they can be crimes, At times forced, At times hoarse, More so when the poem has no meaning, Devoid ...

So this is supposedly light and funny, Let's imagine bathtubs made of money, Not filled with money, made of it, So you can bathe in it and feel real slick. ...

Everlasting, Never-ending I want to see your face, I want your face to see mine, But we watch with memories. I long to hold you tight, I long for you ...

I like it. The second stanza's rhyme seems a little forced, but that's about it (hold, told). Other than that, I really liked this little piece. Good job and good ...

Hello everyone. I might send this piece into a competition, so if you could take maybe 5-10 mins to read and review, I would be so grateful! Also, this is ...

In the land of white trash, there was a boy who gave a crap. His name was Martin E Nash, and he just wouldn't shut his trap. When the kids ...

Wow. I likes it a lot. It has a double meaning a lot of the time. Are you talking about a watermelon or about a person? Or both? That's why ...