danipower0204

Merry Christmas! Want me to review? I'll do it either way. I liked it. I liked that you had a constant rhyme ending, "ee". I also liked the repetition, it ...

I like the way it's written. I also like the pace of the action. It could use with a little more description, but that's just my point of view. I ...

Wow, what a read. Please keep writing more. I liked the mosnter POV, and I definitely want to know what she looks like, what she is. Actually I'm much more ...

I kind of see what you mean. Erm. I think what I did was trying to get into the POV, in this case Beckings' point of view of the second ...

Wow! Awesome review! Thanks a lot for that. I knew this was gonna get a heavy beating, as it's quite "newly" written, in the sense that I haven't gone over ...

Well, you pretty much said it, Maxlovesfang15, merge them, and delete chapter 2. See how it turns out and maybe it'll even be something better than you'd expect it to. ...

Thanks! I agree it is common. When I was writing it I thought I should change a few things as it might sound like every other story. You did in ...

Thank you for your reply! First off, thanks for all the spell-checks and word-checks. It is always good to hear an outside review for a story you've written. I'm not ...

Hey there! I can see the sort of idea in this poem. It's very general, which can be a good thing. I would suggest to add a proper rhythm to ...

Wow! Really liked this. I really liked the rhythm in this poem, and of course the rhyme was pretty much spot on. It reminds me a little of one of ...

Hi there! I kind of like this poem. I guess it's something personal? Let me go on to some features. One thing that bothered me slightly is the fact that ...

I liked it!!! Of course, as others have pointed out, there were a few mistakes in grammar, but nonetheless, great little funny story! I found it original. Of course it's ...

This was a freewrite in comm. arts, and I tought you guys might like it :) As Santa looked over the nice and naughty list of boys and girls, he ...

Here's Chapter 2 of my story. Hope you enjoy and thanks for reading! Chapter 2. I – On the run Daemon Heniath of Blacknight thought himself not a special man. ...

OK, I like your idea a lot! I can already sort of see what will happen next, because in the prologue we are told of the event. So I definitely ...