danipower0204

(Read part 2 here if you wish: ) Part 1 Some may call this age-old story, Made of pure love and of glory, Witch-like, whimsical, wonderful or weird, Trust me ...

Hi everyone! Thanks for all the responses. BenFranks, I put a full stop at the end, you're right. I've capitalized every line because they all spell the poem title downwards ...

To swear to me a truth, yet Revealed as a lie. As is the snake so sinister, so Greedy to let us die, so Ever similar are you, 'til Death ...

I like this poem. I like your rhyming scheme, although it changes in the last stanza where you have A/A/B/B/C instead of A/A/A/A/C. Anyway, I don't think there's much more ...

Passing between years That special moment With that special person In that special place of hers. Atop of a building we sat And looked at the skies Waiting for the ...

Thanks for the reply! I think you're right, so I added the AND. Glad you liked it!

Just something I came up with in like 10 mins right now. Tell me whatcha think! Hope you enjoy. We are what we eat Does it mean that We eat ...

Hi there! Firstly I really like this. There is an air of, I can't really describe, but there definitely something about it that I really like! Now if I was ...

Wow. I instantly knew what the topic was. I really liked the poem. I think you used the words well, especially some of the alliteration and a few rhymes were ...

OK. So I would definitely like to read more of this. My main problem with this was - you are telling, not showing. You could easily expand this I'm sure. ...

Haha! This got me to chuckle inside and out. I was actually expecting something quite different when I started reading, and then I got into it and it flipped 180 ...

Wow I really like this poem. Not sure it works as well lyrical poetry as it does as just poetry in and of itself. But yes, I really do like ...

HAHA this was realy funny. Started reading it as a really serious poem, but the ending just made it great! Great turn at the end. And yes, I agree with ...

Hi everyone, even though I am working on improving Chapter 2, I'd like to know what you think of chapter 3. Reviews and comments are always welcome. I hope you ...

Yeah, you do make sense. I think I will rewrite all of Beckings' part. It is old (wrote it a few years ago), and the Daemon one is new. I ...