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Re: Rhyme Battle
Your ears'll dry up as you listen to this, 'Cause my words are more than just a hit and miss, they're the drought that'll rush through your blood and your ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Rhyme Battle
Shadow this Shadow that, you're just a piece of black, I'm the luscious light that shines through your back, Wait, let me tackle this metaphor so you can understand, I'm ...
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Re: Favorite poets...?
...ahem...does Marshall Mathers count as a poet? :P I personally like Shakespeare. I don't read much poetry. I love Spoken Word Poetry though.
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Rhyme Battle
Your words may be needles, but mine are knives, Bullets shot down from the heavenly skies, Don't be afraid when the Gods arise to shove you into hell with burning ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Heaven
Wow, this is a tragic, tragic tragedy. Holy damn. That's all I really have to say. You don't need to edit this in my opinion. The simplicity of words fits ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: emotions
I find myself sitting in the dark , my door is locked , the curtains are down , i know what I 've done as sharp shooting pain takes over ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: My Forbidden Love
Well, I guess that's it then. And I also guess you can write poetry. Well done.
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: She Bears a Traitor's Sword
Nicely written. If only I could have written poetry when I was 17, and as good as that, too. You sure are gonna be the teacher's favorite! Better watch out!
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Soft Forge
Hi there, so I've been reading your poems since just recently. And you're pretty much an idol right now. However, I agree with both Suzanne and Demoness. I think they're ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Silk of Longing
Run, run into your house where butterflies flap, lose yourself to the singing of sparrows. But don't mind me as I spin in your silk and lose myself in your ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Phobia
Thanks guys!
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Phobia
OK, so I've been having difficulty polishing up this poem. It's rough around the edges, especially the two last stanzas. Any suggestions are highly welcome. THIS WILL BE A SPOKEN ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Bunny Fluffy
Why is this on the front page?
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Brown
Alright, so this is actually a Spoken Word poem, but can be read as it is. I’m the Brown, the son of the Green and the Red, The Brown bred ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Mystery Man
You know what, I actually liked this. Not the kind of thing you would read on here normally. Short, simple. However, devoid of ANY real literary devices. My only (rather ...
Aug 23, 2011
