danipower0204

Thanks guys! Really appreciate all the nice comments from you! And I'm glad you liked it!

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You are the flower of worlds, When I look at you, My heart fills itself. You are the angel’s sweet, When I dare smell you, My tongue takes a bath. ...

As the Winter warms, So does my heart's bubbling love, Beautous Spring step forth.

(This is Part 3. To go back to Part 2 go here: . OR go back to Part 1 if you haven't read it but want to: ) I know ...

Longing for a lost lover Thunder, I’m a spirit who wanders the universe on my own Through eternity, dear Thunder, I walk alone. Thou are not, Thunder, my owner. Truth ...

Thanks Hayden. Appreciate it! More would be coming soon!

I also liked it! It's very different, which is good. My advice is to make it even more extreme. As in: "If you were a heart of glass, I'd SMASH ...

The gates stood open, Open to hell. And there he stood, He who from heaven fell. There stood I, in front of him, He who fell from the skies. I ...

(This is part 2 of the Newinus Trilogy. Read Part 1 first if you haven't here: OR proceed to Part 3 here: ) I know it is quite long, but ...

Thanks for the reviews! Shizzley - I agree with you on that, and I changed it. Thanks for that, I would seriously not have realised it otherwise. Demoness - thanks ...

(If you wish, read Part 2 here: ) I know this is long, fellow writers, but if you could take the time to read and comment, I would give you ...

I also really liked this. I see now I should I shouldn't have told you, how I felt inside. The should and shouldn't...typo I'm guessing? Anyway, I agree with the ...

Hi there! Here to review. OK, I kind of like this piece of poetry. There's something about it. I just don't know what. Her fierce red coat, Illuminated by the ...

I like the rhyme in this. I agree its quite lyrical actually. I thought it was also quite moving. One thing that I am picky on though is rhythm and ...