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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Wild Emotions - "Affectus Torva"

    As I rise with Sun's new rays, a Fiddle in my stomach whirls, Feelings, like the Ocean's craze, Every day these taunting twirls. Censored Rage is freed, untamed, Torturous and ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Craving for Books

    Fingers twitch Sharp breath in Must stay calm Keep it in. Breathing slows Eyes wander Mind strays Start to ponder. What happens next? Got to peek Want to see: Will ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Outside Alone - Foris Solum

    Thanks for the review. Foris Solum means, as the title says, "Outside Alone". ;)

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Outside Alone - Foris Solum

    Fairy tales do make it seem so Ordinary, as conventional as Rising of the sun. But I can tell you that it is but Story Telling, no more Set in ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Empty Mind

    Thanks KatTrain! I'll try to find another word for the V, however I do kind of like it. Let's see what I can come up with. glad you liked it!

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    Damn! I really liked this. The first line literally got me hooked. It's just so absurd that one has to read on. Great job. the list was pretty funny. Not ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Empty Mind

    Hey there, thanks for the review! Really appreciate it and glad you liked it.

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Empty Mind

    May I sit here as I stare, Embody pen and paper bare, as Not a lonesome word escapes this Shallow mind, this empty plate. Vitriolic as it seems, my Ample ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A poem for Japan

    Thanks a lot for your awesome review, Whisperer! I tried my best to follow your suggestions, I do agree with what you've said. About the third to second person, hmm, ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A poem for Japan

    Thanks for your review. I have changed the poem with your suggestions. Glad you found the poem touching. Thanks!

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A poem for Japan

    A little poem for Japan: O Mother Let there be the light of day In the land's and water's way, Let the skins of people cleanse As our mother makes ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I call

    This was great. Really liked it. At first I was like oh well, and not that interested, but the language you used was great. I especially liked the line "in ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sollicitus Intus - "Anxious Within"

    I there, thanks for your review. The idea was just how I felt that day. I decided to make my feelings a poem. As to the meaning, the word xenophobic ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sollicitus Intus - "Anxious Within"

    Another acrostic for our reading pleasure. Again, in latin, as usual. S hriek and shrill within my heart, O mnipresent is the dart of L ove, the one I cannot ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Can't Help It But Cry

    Sometimes I can’t help it but cry. I don’t cry because I'm sad. I cry because I think about the past, And the future. Are they watching? Will they watch? ...

    Mar 14, 2011


Always do what you are afraid to do.
— E. Lockhart, We Were Liars