dancingmangos

I honestly couldn't follow this story most of the time. Maybe if you developed it a LOT more, and stretched each action or scene out MUCH longer then it would ...

I had had serious writer's block for about two months, but kept hoping that some amazing idea would pop up and break it. Unfortunately, it never did, so I finally ...

I'm going to say one thing before I start: You're talented and don't stop being a wonderful artist! Now for my dislikes: 1) I don't really like the background color ...

As a general overview, I really liked it. I like your basic style. :] For my dislikes, here they are; 1) The breakages were weird. As in: we have honey ...

This is great, by the way. It's like a sucker punch to anyone who has watched something terrible, but they chose not to do anything. torn and scared,she ran into ...

This is something I wrote in class that just flowed. They were the first words that came to mind, and they worked, so I put them in. Thank you for ...

Thank you for the reviews, by the way! I would like to point out that this is really just a prologue, or a basic structure, for a story that is ...

To none I can remember To all I can see This life that was given so dearly To me. Shatter the pane that stands between The way to light And ...

This is really beautiful. It seemed to me like the girl was frozen in a state of cracking walls in her head. As in, she has constructed a fragile, but ...

He’s a portly old gentleman, simply strolling through the London streets, as if he knows this small piece of the world by heart. Looking to be about sixty or maybe ...