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Re: Cancer
I think that anyone can relate to this poem, because I don't think there is anyone in the world that hasn't been affected by cancer in some way, no matter ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: My Hero?
This is officially one of my favorite princess stories :) It has the right mix of romance, mystery, and heartbreak. A few nitpicks, though: 1) I was thrown off by ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Crucifix is a Sex Toy
My dad's side of the family is Catholic, except him, so I got what you were saying within the poem and the comment explaining yourself. Also, I am Agnostic and ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: I Do?
This is really great! It demonstrates the huge turmoil of feelings, and I really like that. Besides all my normal nitpicks of capitilization and such, I can see nothing wrong ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Changes
“Oh, shoot. I cut myself,” I looked down at my finger. It was swelling with beads of blood already, “Oh, well. It doesn't hurt that much. In fact, it feels ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Why Didn't I Listen?
This is from my depressed days, when I was hurting over my ex Jacob that my now ex-best friend seduced out from me. Why didn't I listen? Just wait to ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)
My God, this is one of the best novels/stories I have ever read. I'm not exaggerating, either. It's right up there with Harry Potter, for me. I honestly can't find ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
I really liked this! It's great. It almost hurt me personally to think that he was still in love with Leslie, when he went on with his life with Amy ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Daniel
Doors being splintered and broken. Angry, delusional shouts from the man behind the wooden barrier. The flash of silver knives. Her screams. Dark red staining silver. Helplessness and paralysis, drain
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Their Apocalypse
This is so human, yet a more complex human than I could ever attempt to create. Your writing and the insight into the human soul is amazing, and I'm excited ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Hey, Boy!
So very relatable, as you already said. I love it! It seemed a bit short and lacking in depth. Yes, it's a short poem, but maybe different words could create ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Classroom Epicness
It's good but kind of random. It's not super interesting, which is a story killer. My dislike: 1) To me, this really had no purpose. Unless it has a secret ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance
I really liked this! But please fix the title spelling, it's killing me...unless it's on purpose. Now for my dislikes: 1) Some awkward breaks. I think the review before me ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Coffee Elves
I liked it in general. My iPod decided to play Last Kiss by Taylor Swift, though, so that may intensified the likability of this story. I didn't really get what ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Soak Up The Sun: Chapter 1: Sun Rays
My dislikes: 1) Why didn't Mitchie just slap Georgie across the face as hard as she could? Honestly, if she hates her that much , then why hold back? 2) ...
May 29, 2011
