dancingmangos

This is short but good. It's got a good impact to it. \ There were a few punctuation nitpicks, like this: as I lifted off the floor , being resurrected ...

I like this :) It's got a serious, slightly nostalgic edge to it that I really appreciate. I don't exactly understand what you're trying to say, though. This seems like ...

I like this. I'm not really understanding who "they" are, but maybe it's better that way. At first I thought you were talking about schizophrenia, but then at the end ...

What's your book about? That would help the name-choosing process.... But I like The Tactican or the Battles of Time.

Our fears are finally starting to settle down. Rahi and I have begun to have one word conversations about stuff like the weather, or the dishes, or our sleeping arrangements. ...

Our fears are finally starting to settle down. Rahi and I have begun to have one word conversations about stuff like the weather, or the dishes, or our sleeping arrangements. ...

I really like two of the ideas you brought to light: "All I ever wanted became everything I fear", and that knowledge changes things tremendously. I strongly adhere to these ...

This was sad but very beautiful. It had great nostalgia to it, and I especially liked it because of two things: I love the feeling of the cold breeze at ...

I have a boyfriend that I like so so so much, and this is just so perfect :D I can especially relate to the dork part; he's so dorky sometimes, ...

Wow...really powerful. It has the perfect amount of confusion and mystery added to it. I really liked how I wasn't sure what was going on throughout the story, but then ...

I slowly peel my eyes away from the man. No point in lingering over the question of his fate. I have to help Rahi, my cousin, and myself survive these ...

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site in a while :) It was actually interesting after the first three sentences. Okay, so I thought this ...

This is perfection!! The right length, depth, thought sequence. I especially liked how the girl doesn't talk, since it reinforces the idea that she's done for, has no more life ...

This is perfection!! The right length, depth, thought sequence. I especially liked how the girl doesn't talk, since it reinforces the idea that she's done for, has no more life ...

I think that anyone can relate to this poem, because I don't think there is anyone in the world that hasn't been affected by cancer in some way, no matter ...