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Re: Dont Follow Me
The meter was great! It flows sooooo nicely and the emotion is genuine and strong and has just the right amount of pleading and hope. There feels like there's a ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Sneak-Peek of the new YWS
It makes me feel special. :D ........ Yay YWS!
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: I do not sleep.
Ya, it is Anglo-Saxon and is actually on a tomb-stone. The one that you have, Fellow, has the second line in each stanza (except the first and last stanzas) just ...
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: Please Don't Run
The flow and tone are great! And I actually really like the length. Any longer and it might seem forced. I love the ending "The Lord will meet you/At the ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Smoking Camels on Your Grave
I really really liked it. And the Camel thing is kinda implied, and its a great image. Very personal. I think it's a very real way to mourn someone that ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Do you carry a notebook with you?
I have a plain 5-subject blue one (I had a black binder for my last novel because I had no much info) so it looks like my other ones for ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: 7 hints for writing a good story
Firestalker I agree, but I also agree with Chirantha a bit. Perhaps it's different for other writers, but just having a clear vision of where you want to go is ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: What do you love about writing?
It might sound weird, but I'm myself when I write. There is never another time in my life (not even performing music or being in church) where I am totally ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: My Poetry's S**t!?
Honestly ---- hilarious.
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: How it was supposed to be
Seriously, I loved this poem. My favorite part was "We all have those names that break through the veneers of sleep, the silly lies we tell the ones we love ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Strangers
andiminlovegalore - I hope I spelled your name right, and that 'spelled' is ok to use in that sentence instead of 'spelt' since they are interchangeable here. You are awesome. ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Strangers
Thanks for the feedback! It was just a little poem that I started writing randomly and was done with after five minutes, but I ended up liking it and thought ...
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: Strangers
Eyes shut in the hopeless attempt to drown your voice out La la la – I don’t even know you Sleeping, dreaming, for a hundred years or more Piles of ...
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: how many drafts do you go through??
I edit all of my novels... a lot This is my process Get something from a daydream- write random words in a notebook- get characters/plot (they feed off of one ...
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Shadowmancer was a waste of money, time, and paper. Honestly, I felt like I was missing out on some joke. I didn't even put it on my book shelf. And ...
Aug 26, 2008
