dahlia58

It all depends on the story. Chapter lengths vary^^

Thanks for reviewing! I'll go back and do a huge editing-session when I have time. Also, all 4 chapters so far are less than 3000 words (about 2500 I think). ...

Thanks for reviewing! This is how the characters talk most of the time, so I can't really change that, but I'll look out for unnecessary words.

Sorry I'm not a great reviewer. EverLight, WinnyWriter and a lot of other users give more detailed reviews...

Ok, then. I guessed wrong~

That's good

@LZPianoGirl (I forgot to add this...)

Same to you, thanks for your review^^ If Ch. 4 was fun, feel free to read the previous chapters (of course, you don't have to leave any reviews for them). ...

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you got parts of the story right despite not reading the previous chapters. However, this chapter can't be really understood without prior knowledge...All ...

Thank you very much for reviewing^^ The story gets dramatic again in Ch. 4

Thank you very much!

Got it. Thank you again! I'll definitely review ch. 17 before midnight.

So, if I fix my wording here and there, this chapter will be interesting?

Thanks for the review^^ I'm really happy you did research on the names! It's just, "Akane" is written in hiragana, not kanji (a lot of Japanese people do this for ...

I finally finished my I'll give a more detailed review on Code:delete chapter 17 today.