dahlia58

About the "can't stop crimes until they happen" thing...I heard it directly from an actual policeman once.

Thanks for reviewing! My mom suggested I change "blue" to "green," since blue indicates asphyxiation. Ruri is 9, and Jun is 14, so yes, their height difference is big...I'm glad ...

Thank you for your kind comment^^

Thanks for reviewing! They're not detectives. They're just smart, so their police inspector friend sometimes asks for their help in solving cases.

I don't think I'll be writing another short story. This work doesn't have to be considered a part of the main work, but it does introduce their personalities a bit

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Thanks for reviewing! This is actually the first short story I ever wrote (that's not homework). I didn't edit it or anything, but I just decided to post it and ...

I'm not a good reviewer, but I'll try my best^^ I'd love to see your review/comments as well

Chapter 3

Thanks for reviewing! The cast are used to strange events, and they're pretty strong themselves, so they don't get scared easily.

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Thank you!

Also, I guarantee Akari is innocent. The different "alerts" indicate a person's physical state.

This is amazing. Your writing style has no flaws, as far as I can tell. And this chapter is honestly great as it is now. No need to edit anything.

Thanks for reviewing again^^ Shou and Ruri are both 9, and the 3 oldest characters are 26.