dahlia58

Sorry, I meant to type "your"

Thanks for the review! You're understanding of the chapter and characters in this chapter are spot-on. I'm impressed.

@Liberty You were the most recent user besides chrisdixon to review my work, so I was wondering if you'd be interested in this one. Of course, it's completely up to ...

Thank you very much It's been a very productive review day^^

Yoko's me in a nutshell...(I can't get S ranks on hard songs either)

Wenton sounds like a real name to me. Obviously, Wenton thinks Cody is annoying, but I think the boy's really cute. This first chapter was definitely interesting. It caught my ...

Thanks for reviewing again

Ah, I see. Taiyaki doesn't need to be capitalized^^ And I'll consider the rest of your advice.

And as for the "own distinct voice," all of them talk normally, so I can't change the dialogue. I'll add more physical descriptions.

Also, I can't find any capitalization issues

You didn't, don't worry! And sorry for not replying sooner. I didn't see the notif

I will. But the profile page is not meant to be a crutch. I just mentioned it.

Thanks for reviewing. There's a profile page for the characters, if you're interested.

It isn't...