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Re: An empty desk
I wrote this poem for my dear class mate who died on the 6th of March 2011 This is for you Tebello An empty desk. A new day is born. ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
Hi there. This poem was really put together well. I am a full believer in Christ and i know that he loves every one no matter what they believe. The ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Prologue and Chapter One: A new beginning
Hey guys :) this is my first time posting a chapter to a novel, I have been wanting to write this book for a long time now, but have just ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Old Memory
Bury the memory. The one you have of me. Wash all the dreams away. It's me who can not stay. Look around you, open you heart. It is time for ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: A Never Ending Pain
thanks guys for your reviews... i really appreciate you for taking the time to read my work. I do agree that it needs to be more specific but i did ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: A Never Ending Pain
it might not be so good :) i did it at 12:30 pm :D A Never Ending Pain It’s eating away at my soul. My heart, becoming black like coal. ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: That Voice
I'm going to agree with KJ. you definitely have got something here and it easily ropes people in the same affect many great writers have :D. One problem (unless this ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Masterpeice
Whats the poem portraying. I do agree though that it is a masterpiece. I think that the poem needs a bit more feeling to it, I can see it comes ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: A letter to my beloved-I did not die
Now that I'm gone, please don't forget me Don't cry for me For I did not die I am up in the sky Watching over you Is what I now ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: When I Was Young
it's a great poem, feeling for the bugs though :lol: and sounds like you have a good imagination pm me when you post anything new
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: strange and funny rap
i guess i should work on my punctuation and my rhyming skills but hey its my 1st rap and I'm learning from my mistakes
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: dairy of Dylan Mac Plan
Diary of Dylan Mac Plan July 10th 2006 Dear dairy Its 7:00 am and time to get ready for school and I’m not looking forward to the 1st period its ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: strange and funny rap
my people all think im cool so no need to act like a fool i know how to make the party form and look over there here comes the swarm ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: I hate you with all my hearts
its a good song but usually put the chorus after like 2/3 verses because then it sounds better and the chorus must usually have the name of the song in ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Amore(Love).
i'm new at this so lets see how i do :) the story was good but you didn't explain the characters that well or give ages. the reason that victor ...
Jul 4, 2008
