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Hey there! I don't usually review this type of thing but I'll try my best to give you my impressions of your work. The first one: I love the hand, ...

I was given a character (The Shrew) and a setting (the Academy of Heavenly Business) in my creative writing class. This is the story I created. It is sattirical, but ...

Oh my goodness, this was very good. Your grammer and spelling are nearly perfect, one thing I noticed though that made me laugh because it seemed so out of place ...

Welcome to YWS!! Hope to see you around soon :) *daydreamer

Will do will do! :)

Wow! This was amazing and I mean that. You should be really really proud of this. I enjoyed every last decadent bit of it! It was fleshed out with plenty ...

He stands, tall and rugged, with hard features and easy eyes. The skin on his face is as weatherbeaten and well-worn as his boots, his faithful boots. Try just saying ...

Hey there, first of all know that I do normally review poetry and Iam by no means knowledgeable on the subject but the title caught my eye and I just ...

I am an outcast. I do all the dirty work and watch others enjoy the time of their lives. Fridays are okay, I thought, what with every one being busy ...

Hey Pointe! I see you posted more :) I must say I didn't like these chapters as much as the first. They seemed really hurried and fast. I felt like ...

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 I'd appreciate it if you could do a chapterly review as I post more. Thanks! *daydreamer

Sorry I don't have a lot of time to review so I'll just give my first impressions ok? First off, this was really good! I enjoyed reading it alot. It ...

Howdy!

I loved you, I cared for you, I died for you. You weren’t sure, you were confused, you hated yourself for missing the chance. It all started one day at ...

Chapter 2 Liesabet's heart skipped wildly in her chest as the initial silence between them seemed to last longer than it should. But then the tall young man beside her ...