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Re: I'm All Your Living For
I really liked this although it seemed a bit cliche and the idea wasn't new or original by any means. Girl sees Boy, Girl likes Boy, Boy doesn't like Girl. ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Blanket
Hey there :) *rubs hands together because they're frozen solid at the tips Didn't really know what to expect from this one, and you surprised me I must say. I ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Willow Chapter 1
Chapter 1 Rowan stood rooted to the spot at the sight of the performer juggling three flaming torches. The night disappeared by the fire that leapt from his mouth as ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Durallia
Hey there, you caught me in a rare mood....I don't normally review fantasy but this caught my fancy. Very well written, great job! I could picture the calm of her ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: That lonely road (Memory Lane) Part 1
Ehh I'll be honest with you, I didn't care for it that much. Everything I was thinking about it has already been put out there so I'll just re-iterate the ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: A Czech Christmas
Pish posh, these are beautiful! Iam half Czech on my mother's side and have always wanted to visit the C.R. These pictures gave me a little glimpse into that and ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Miles and Rivers
Yay a post in H.F! My favorite forum. ;D Daydreamer here and I really liked this piece. It was an interesting look into a side of the war that hasn't ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Middle to End (nicknamed)
Daydreamer here! I won't go into too much detail with this mostly because I have school and don't have the time so I apologize in advance ok? First of all ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 4
Chapter 4 (sorry this took so long to post, life's been busy lately.) Strange hands reached out to Liesabet as she lay curled in a ball on the filthy floor ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Where should I post this?!
Thanks guys!
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Where should I post this?!
Hi there I was just wondering if I should post a work of mine under short stories if it has multiple parts. It's not long enough I feel for a ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 3
Chapter 3 Things began to change in Celle, small and unnoticeable in the beginning but then slowly over time they began to escalate. Signs began to appear in store shops ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Broken
All I have to say is that this is very well done, excellent writing. You have a lot of talent. I won't go into detail since almost everything has been ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: The Story Of Lisa, Who Didn't Think She Was Beautiful
Oh my gosh this was really beautiful! Very well done, I don't even want to nitpick anything about it. But if I had to I had two things that stood ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Ali's Hot Dogs *Edited*
Hey Elinor! For being ''very rough'' this was ''very good''! The idea of a young woman running a hotdog stand for money so she won't be evicted from her apartment ...
Nov 22, 2010
