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Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 8
Chapter 8 Liesabet's mind was tortured for the rest of the day after what they had been forced to do. So many bodies, all stacked carelessly like cords of wood ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Chapt 3:Not after everything we'd shared.
Yay I have some answers! Adopted hmm? Nice twist! This chapter was a good one as you finally are starting to tie up some loose ends but yet still leave ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapt 2:Not after everything we'd shared
Back again! Where is Luke???? I want to know where he is soo badly and why he won't tell her anything? Is he sick with a terminal illness? Hiding from ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapt 1:Not after everything we'd shared..
Hey Kakagirl, here Iam as promised! *cracks knuckles and starts reading....... Well ok here goes. Everything has pretty much already been said but I'll just give you my review anyways! ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 4
Did you read the other three parts? And thank you so very much! ~day
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
No this isn't chapter eight, I won't be finished with that until this weekend but I'd love if you looked over this short story I threw together. Hope to hear ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 4
When I finally reached my family's apartment, I found it to be empty and decided to knock on Abraham's door, hoping somehow that the door would open and he would ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 3
Praying that the elevators were still working I mashed my thumb repeatedly against the button, while shouting and banging against the double doors. I placed my ear against them and ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 2
The day of the fire started off as any other normal day. I awoke at the break of dawn, slipped on my well-worn work dress, grabbed my hankerchief containing a ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 1
*Iam aware this is the forum for short stories, this is too short to be a novel but too long to post all at once, hence I shall post it ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Portraits.
Hi there :) These are really well drawn, congratulations! Just a few things I noticed: The ballerina appears to me at least a little stocky and manly in figure. Also ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Here Iam in your WRFF forum as you requested :) Chapter 7 is up and waiting for you, I can't wait to hear from you again! ~day
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 7
Chapter 7 Liesabet bit her lip and turned her head away quickly so as not to give away the tears threatening to spill over. Corrie paused and then let her ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: My College Essay(I need to send it in by tomorrow!)
My College Essay (on why I want to be a vet tech) -Please tell me what you think, my eyes need a break! I want to be a vet tech ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 6
Chapter 6 (previously) A moment later three people emerged, trudging slowly to the top. Two elderly women clutching their handbags and a little boy who only appeared to be seven ...
Dec 27, 2010