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Re: The Tales of a Common Bus Driver
Hey there! This was great, each character was so different and well-explained even down to the smallest detail. I agree with a previous review though that there really isn't much ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Chains.
Yes, write more! I loved your story, aside from some punctuation errors, I thought you had a good ending! It was a good story, and its subject is right up ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Limondis' Revenge
You reviewed mine so I'm here to review yours! I normally don't care for fantasy fiction but you had me interested, and I never got bored. Well done and very ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Old Poem
I just finished reading/reviewing your Russian Roulette story and I found the link to this, to my surprise it was you again! I definitely think your strengths lean more towards ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Old Story
Hey there, Can't decide whether I like this or not. I don't really get it and that's making it harder to like. It has potential but it needs some work. ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Frozen Love, Heated Pain
Hey there, I don't really know how to say this. :) Well let's just say I posted something a few hours ago in Historical Fiction. New idea, been swimming around ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: I Was One Of Them
Please review and give me your opinions! Winds screamed their way across the wide expanse of open ground. The sky was an angry shade of blackish-grey, but I suppose it ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: An Immigrant's Tale
Yes it is, sorry it's been a while. My computer won't let me remove it and put it where it belongs for some reason.
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Of a Hungry Fiend (English Homework)
Bravo! Nicely written. I'm not really a fan of Beowulf but it was exciting and it captured my attention from the beginning. *daydreamer
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Random Bits and Pieces
Hey! First of all may I just say that your opening paragragh read like a torture scene from a Saw movie which unfortunately I had the unfortunate pleasure of witnessing ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: The Funeral
hey there! I don't really have time for a total review but my first impression was that your story was interesting. The title peaked my interest and when I clicked ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Heaven
hey there! I liked this a lot! I'd just like to say that I like your ending with the statement about the doll, it seems right that a little girl ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Red roads through Gettysburg
Hey there! I thought your story was pretty good! Here are the problems I had with it: 1. There were a lot of spelling errors. 2. The journal entries seemed ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: An Immigrant's Tale
I don't know if anyone here will remember me but I'm back for another go :) This is a story that's been floating around in my head for a couple ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: What musical album has affected your writing most?
Hmmm.... this is hard. If I absolutely had to choose: Parts of the ''Defiance'' Soundtrack, (particularly the song ''Exodus'') Parts from ''The Cider House Rules'' soundtrack, Regina Spektor, and Pete
Dec 17, 2009
