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Unfortunately, I know exactly how the narrator is feeling. Anyway, there are a few things that I didn't really care for in this. The sentences seemed a bit awkward, as ...

I've just reread your writing like, three times now to find out what to say, because I was just speechless. Your rhyme scheme was excellent. The AABB scheme is somewhat ...

Oh freaking wow. That is breathtaking. It really is. Confusing, yet leaves you in awe. The description was just brilliant. I love how in the first stanza, fourth line you ...

I love this. I really do. It reminds me of a metaphor; like, the narrator is Mother Nature or something. The confusion you give off is brilliant, and not like ...

I can't relate to this, because I've been to the same school all my life, but just imagining moving schools and places so much makes me want to scream. I ...

I really liked this. I really did. If it's what I'm thinking, are the demons representing depression? If I'm just being clueless, I'm sorry. =P She's alone and she hates ...

I love poems that give emotional and personal appeal. They're very pleasant to read. There are a few mistakes, I think. But there is a light At the end of ...

I really loved this! It has a kind of mysterious feel to it. Just the name sucked me in. I think you should be just a tad more specific as ...

i sink d o w n below, way down, way down, way down, i cant breathe, just keep f a l l i n g, just keep s i n ...

I really liked this. A lot. Thought it's a bit confusing, but the confusion adds onto the mysterious and eerie parts. There's not really anything I can say. It was ...

I AM SHAMELESS! =P Starlight Genre: Realistic Fiction, Romance, Paranormal Ian Holbrook doesn't want anything to do with anyone but Grace. Grace Hartley has been his best friend since he ...

The message of it was amazing. I love things like that - that show those kinds of messages where it just leaves you in awe and you're just like, "Wow. ...

I really like this. It's so straight-forward, and I love the story in it. I've gone through a situation like that before, where we were just best friends and considered ...

Hello! I'm new also, (: I can totally relate to the "dumb-sounding stories in the back of my computer." I've been there way too many times. xP I hope to ...

I want to read Burned by Ellen Hopkins. I've read Crank, Impulse, Identical, and Tricks , but I've not read any of the others and I'd really like to. They're ...