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forem - forever On the first day of freshmen year, I vowed to my friends and everyone I talked to that first day that I was not going to make ...

Before I read the spoiler, I could have sworn you were writing in the mind of a schizophrenic. Like, a voice is telling them to go hit a car or ...

I don't think I've read something quite this brilliant in forever. It's amazing. I love the context of it. I also love the rhyming, and just how it sounds! It ...

So I had to look up the word noose like a dork, and I reread your poem with my new knowledge -- and I love it! I think you captured ...

The first thing I'd like to know is just what you're talking about. It's a great poem, and I like the mystery, but it's confusing. Maybe you should clarify on ...

Wow, this was really well written. I love the message and the rhyming. The message isn't really one you see very often, and I think it should be seen just ...

Leave me to bleed on my own; watch me as everything you've done becomes known. Revenge isn't as great as it seems; perhaps backstabbing would be a better scream. Don't ...

First off, I love the repetition and the rhyming. Very unique. I love the picture it paints in my mind as well, pretty damn vivid. I love everything about this! ...

this will drag on forever. Slipknot, Bring Me The Horizon, Nirvana, Onerepublic, Paramore, Skrillex, The Fray, Avenged Sevenfold, Blue October, Thursday, Avril Lavigne, Ryan Star, HeyHiHello!, Nicki M

Oh wow, I loved this. I totally loved this. Very, very well written, and it reminds me of nursery rhymes. I love it! I also love how you can rhyme ...

Very emotional! I liked how I could pick out the rhythm as soon as I started in on it. It's very mysterious, and I've read it over like five times, ...

I love this. Very gentle and strongly emotional. You should add more to it - why did she have her heart broken? Who broke her heart? Was it love that ...

I really liked the message you have. A few things that drew me off: But now look upon her, a princess, Perfectly adorned in the finest, The things my own ...

Facebook &, tumblr. I don't see the point in Twitter.

There was once a man who decided to fall in the ocean. He didn't particularly know what he was doing, but he knew he had to fall. He wanted to ...