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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: wait and see

    The hospital it was so clean, so sterile. The spotless white walls made me feel like I wasn’t welcome. Nurses threw us empty stares and half-hearted smiles as we passed ...

    Sep 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Family Kidnapped By Ninjas--Need Ransom

    your story flows really nicely. You should really write more.

    Sep 2, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The last dark Day: The Saving of Zansia Chapters one and two

    hello!! I really like the plot idea and i think that you should definitely continue writing. Some of the writing could use some work thought. The opening scene could use ...

    Sep 2, 2009


Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca