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Re: wait and see
The hospital it was so clean, so sterile. The spotless white walls made me feel like I wasn’t welcome. Nurses threw us empty stares and half-hearted smiles as we passed ...
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Re: Family Kidnapped By Ninjas--Need Ransom
your story flows really nicely. You should really write more.
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: The last dark Day: The Saving of Zansia Chapters one and two
hello!! I really like the plot idea and i think that you should definitely continue writing. Some of the writing could use some work thought. The opening scene could use ...
Sep 2, 2009
