curiousvampire

Nitpicks are in bold. I woke up, tired. I couldn't remember what I was doing done yesterday. I went to have breakfast and I saw my mom, in love . ...

This gets more enticing with every part and chapter I read. Hey shubi, I'm here to review as always. Every mistake plausible looks like they have already been taken care ...

Wicked scary! This was great, edgy, eerie and terrifyingly beautiful in other words I thought it was brilliant. You captured the movie mood and characters perfectly in this piece and ...

Hey Kadee, your neighborhood vampire is here to review! Like Nike said for your first romance piece. The only thing I wished that you seriously did was to add more ...

Welcome Tomoko, love your avatar by the way. WOW, you do all those thing, that's awesome! And to answer your question about the whole role play check out the storybooks.

Hey Crescent, WOW first off this was really sad and sweet , I liked it a lot and was very unexpected. It was something new. Anyways as love stories goes, ...

Well done, except for a few mistakes this was belivable and sadly abit on the corny side, but that's okay sometimes corny is good and this my fellow writer was ...

Ha ha, she lost her top............can you say embarrassing moment? Okay this chapter had me going, seriously. It was good and humorous in every sense, I liked it. There was ...

Long Time no see, Stori! On to your piece, this was good,but sadly in my eye's not great. First off to me it could have been a wee bit longer ...

Welcome Lala, this was exceptional. Good job, fellow writer! Keep writing, see you around the site in the future and a big THANKS FOR THE READ!

It looks like the wolves are taking over! Hey W-Lupus nice meeting ya, I'm curious by the way. This is ver interesting and I like to read more, so if ...

Whoa! This was great, so weird and unexpected. I liked it! Thanks for the read. Bravo my friend.

Like the daisiamari said the title doesn't fit the story and I liked where you were going with the first paragraph and all, but then when I came to the ...

Welcome to the site, isn't it awesome? Hope your finding your way around the place, okay. Anyways the piece wasn't horrid or particularly spectacular, but it was okay and I ...

This is how it is from middle school through high school, sadly you have the populars, nerds, emos and everything else- been there done that. This was okay, except for ...