curiousvampire

Hey Skins, just here to ask for a review for a short story I wrote and your thoughts on it. Please and thank you in advance. Here's the link:

Mage you look so handsome and tusker your pretty cute yourself, love the shades. :)

OMG! They're both pretty good and I love the second one. I would so wear it! Very impressive designs indeed. :)

Granted, but your brain explodes from remembering everything. I wish school was never invented.

Very sad indeed, sweet twisted and somber every aspect of your story was good, but like Nike pointed out I'm also confused about the whole two months thing. But by ...

A/N: A working I title if you got ideas for one PM me. Tis is also just something new I'm experimenting with. For now enjoy and review please. Hazel irises ...

Welcome Darthkay to YWS hope your getting along okay. For your first post your composition was good, the imagery was subtle and descriptions creative, your usage of words was powerful. ...

Welcome Eyah to the YWS family I've been here for only two months now and I have notice my writing has gotten better ever since I joined so your writing ...

Hey Nepo, lets get straight to the point shall we you have some grammatical errors that Kaedee pointed out so I suggest you fix them please and thank you. This ...

First off your avatar is awesome, second I loved it and third think it's definitely destined for another chapter. Sad really that he thought it was joke before and now ...

Looks like I'm here first :). Welcome fellow writer to YWS hope your getting along alright. Now on to the story, it was very interesting and sort of a cliche ...

Very dynamic writing I must say, your execution and style of your story was very well thought out. It was something new and interesting. Also your descriptions were precise and ...

Hey Embee, nice to meet ya and welcome too YWS hope you like it so far :)! Everyone is way nice and polite so far I've been here- which has ...

Nice to meet ya originalhobbit :). I actually found YWS while searching for some new writers sites to join and now here I live forever more thanks to goggle. Hope ...

WOW! I'm head over heels with this. Your story was splendid and I enjoyed, the descriptions were great and the ending very unexpected. I agree with Navita to transition the ...