curiousvampire

Peter I tried to enter my one bedroom apartment with the slightest of noise, Jordan should have been asleep by now and I didn't want to wake her up.Flipping on ...

Arda "Dang," Monty breath,"I don't see why I continue playin',"He shook his head.Monty never been any good at cards , especially when he was playing with the best dealer ever ...

Peter Ollie dug in his pocket til he found what was the meaning to of the annoying sound emitting from his pants pocket,pressing it to his ear he answered and ...

Peter I see Alexis and Ollie whispering to each other giggling and laughing at there private joke across the table and my heart feels like it had been plucked out ...

Arda I took a quick acute turn into a near alley, using the darkness of night to my advantage taking cover in a alcove.Running fro the police was no easy ...

Peter "Stupid bow," I growl as I wrestled with the bow tie around my neck. Sadly I was losing. "So where are you going so spruced up?" My little sister, ...

Hey DirtyMoney welcome to YWS and I enjoyed your story. What a great start to enter YWS world. I liked it, it was something new and deadly so I just ...

First off I would Like to say welcome YWS! Second your work is an unreadable block, can you please at least indent your work and I do agree with DirtyMoney ...

God your story is long,but I got through it though. It was interesting and your descriptions were vivid and exciting, I actually felt I was there as one of the ...

To put it simply it was a sweet heartfelt goodbye :cry:.There was nothing wrong except the misspelled 'Mary' part, so all in all I really like it and hope there ...

I wanna save the world! Name: Arda Mikhail gender: male age: 17 Appearance: Anime-Boys-anime-guys-3786110-821-1171.jpg Personality :laid-back and lazy at first glance but he's always observing others

Don't stay on one genre alone. Try to get a feel for others and experiment maybe you might like it more than your original favorite genre. I try at least ...

I love to write because I'm an only child. Its a lonely being an only child and I live a pretty quiet life with little drama to spice it up. ...

I love to write because I'm an only child. Its a lonely being an only child and I live a pretty quiet life with little drama to spice it up. ...

Sadly I got to say this story was....... awsome. I L.O.V.E.D it :D . There were no mistakes I spotted since LavedeBlue and RangerHawk already pointed them out except for ...