curiousvampire

I'm a big fan of anything fantasy, so I had to review your work. Since Lauren already pointed out your mistakes, I guess I'm here to inspire and tell you ...

I was parked in front of the library and knew that both Alison and Ollie would probably be waiting for me. I thought about ditching, but then again I made ...

Thanks for the confidence and advice, I will keep on trying to get better.

I rarely write poems so if you must tear it to shreds for my awful work please do. Untitled My angry thoughts are left to ferment. My patience is waning ...

Hey Kerza, I'm here to review. This chapter was stunning! I really couldn't find anything remotely wrong in this piece. Mr Landsin reminds me of my algebra teacher, except better.Ayden ...

Peter I was parked in the student parking lot, my seat reclined back and my eyes closed the events of yesterday not forgotten.All yesterday I tried to forget the kiss ...

Hey Kerzarwolf, your vampire friend is here to review. Wow! Things are getting interesting A great follow up to the first was believable and simple. I agree with Rip you ...

Oh, shoot all my favorites has already been picked :cry: looks like I'll have to make one up Name:Crypt age:unknown gender:Male appearance: animekid-1-1.jpg Personality: emotion-less most of the time

I read the first couple of chapters and love them and this one was well.......WOW!I expected her fiance to be coming back but not so quickly. I really felt bad ...

This is getting odd,but I like it! Peter The movie bored me to tears and Ollie seemed to have the same to share my feelings toward it. Ollie wasn't as ...

Peter "Sorry," I collided into someone hard .When I realized who I bumped into my smile turned upside down:It was Ollie Don't get me wrong,I really didn't have anything against ...

Hey I like the story so far, especially with the vampire mania thing-even though I love them,but I also love werewolves-it was really original and realistic.You reeled me in from ...

Thank you for the help!! I am very much into fiction.

I am looking for a mentor but :roll: I have no idea how to get one. Help!!!! :?

Peter "Where you going Jordie," I asked while she put her blond hair in a pony tail watching her reflection in bathroom mirrors. She walks pass me and into the ...