curiousvampire

Good, but it was a little too fast and characters had little emotion. I felt nothing really; no excitement or happiness of any kind, it was pretty drawl.Boneless without any ...

Welcome all of you and hope you enjoy what YWS has to offer!

Hi,my name is CuriousVampire and I shall be your reviwer for today. First the nitpicks that needs fixing, but their really wasn't any: "Your hair," said his mother, touching his ...

Hey there your story was good; definitely liking material. I've never heard of The New Tomorrow and now I really want to know more about it. Please write some more, ...

Paden I sniffed what was on top of the stove and growled with disgust; eggs again oh well it was better than nothing. Placing four of them on my plate ...

Okay so far ,but it you need to write a more.....please. The only thing that I had problem I had was very minor,yet noticeable: Even thought the man said he ...

1.Poison 2.The League series 3.Storm Theif 4.Rainbow Boys Series 5.Vladamir Tod series 6.The Killing Joke 7.Levithan These are my seven deadly sins and I can't get enough of them .

'The Canvas Room,' is haunting yet beautiful and humorous. Creative and lush imaginative writing. As you can see I really thought this piece was serpentine,it sent chills up my spine ...

Bone-chillingly splendid. Kept me glued to my seat to the epic ending leaving me dazed with vexation.A wonderful piece of work. Brilliant and mesmerizing. Keep writing.

Hi, the name is Curious and I stumbled onto your story and soon fell in love with it.'The Elemental Lands', was spellbinding from the beginning to end. Darkly brilliant, disturbing ...

I thought that your story was well written and creative. There was nothing wrong that I could see so all in all it was a solid piece of literature. I ...

OMG!!! I think I'm in love! Your story began dramatically and ended with simple cliff hanger that leaves the reader hunger more.......much more. It was a basic cliche, but it ...

I've decided to only have one character. Name: Paden/Akivi(When in his wolf form) gender: male age: 16 Role: experiment(can transform into a wolf) Appaerance: WolfBoy.jpg Personality: Very mischievous

I've read most of Darren Shan's work and Demonata was the first book of his that I read and became obsessed with so I just had to review.I loved your ...

Can I create two characters?