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Good message. (Sorry I'm not very good at reveieing work :( )

Good poem. Sorry I'm not very good at reveiwing work. :(

WOW! I love this poem. Keep writing!

I like the second photo the best. IT'S SOOOO CUTE! Where I live, christmas is in summer, because I'm in the southern hemisphare. Last year it was 30'c!

Christmas Is here, All the lights, all the bells. Sales in shops, and toys all around. Gifts under the tree, The angel ontop. Nativity scenes, And the bonbons go pop. ...

The quality of it was good (the main item is focused the background blurred). Maybe take photos of angels or santa hats.

Simple and sweet. Very effective. Keep writing! :D

Thanks guys!

You might need to write something other than stuff about Jonny.

Christmas Is here, All the lights, all the bells. Sales in shops, and toys all around. Gifts under the tree, The angel ontop. Nativity scenes, And the bonbons go pop. ...

Good poem Sweet Moments! Great point. SAVE THE EARTH!! :D

This is a bit confusing when it gets to the second stanza, like you didn't know exactly what to do next. In the second stanza all of a sudden you ...

nice avatar! :D

I enjoyed this piece, and dare I say it, Taylor Swift would write a song about a girl like this I loved it, great writing! Keep it up.

Lovely poem and great message. You just need to correct some spelling errors, apart from that nice poem and keep writing. :)