cupcake

Nice way to end the year.

Hey SweetMoments! When you finish this novel you should use it for WOT billions. You're such a good writer! Keep writing! :D

This poem is different. Different is good. Love this poem. Keep writing! :D

Didn't you come into chat and say you liked peacocks and the end kept being censored? Yep, that was me! :D

I'm not very good at this type of poem, but I thought I would give it a shot. :D Please give me feedback. P- Posture in their neck is good. ...

Nothing (I don't wear make-up). Whats the point in hiding your face behind make-up? Everyone's beutiful in their own way without make-up. Your just adding un-needed chemicals to your skin.

Merry late christmas and happy early new year!

I think this would be better if you worked on the flow and put it into stanzas. Changes are in bold Comments are in bold and fragments from a sentence ...

A short little poem I just put together. I don't often write poetry, but I thought I might give it a try. Hope you like it. I know you're angry ...

mmm...mmm...mhm mmm...mmm...mhm here i am good begining stanza bron through the saddness and the pain here i am torn apart, ripping at the seems just let me go, just let ...

i've been good unlike the other years. I thought that was funny. My one other little thing is the rhyme at the end sounded forced. Besides that, I loved this ...

Kewl pictures!

I can kind of relate to this song, although I'm not quite thirteen yet but I'm close.great song, keep writing! :D

i enjoyed the lyrics but i wouldn't really class this as a song, i would class this as a poem of some sort if you changed it around this would ...

Love it! Great lyrics. :D :D :D