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8/10 Different but cool.

Granted(I'm sure you are already), but you are cooler than Nightshade and you are so cool you became uncool. I wish Australia wouln'd have so many natural disasters because the ...

The stars look so pretty, Just a little kitty. I ment to say "Just like a little kitty" I'll edit that now.

8/10

For being "The Lone Ranger".

Free dice

I know it's a little short, but I couldn't come up with any more ideas for this poem. They shine so bright, In the sky at night. In your eyes ...

Hey, thanks for the reviews guys! I'll keep working on what you have said with my other work. -Cupcake :D

I like think this poem is great. I wish I had wings. To sing and to call, to laugh and to fall. To live and to breath, to never ever ...

*looks confused* This is different, I like differeent. I don't really get the point of this poem. Keep writing! :D

This poem is so cute! Just one thing, You started each stanza with It's almost kind of funny apart from the second one, it just seems a bit off, but ...

I liked the first one best. I wish I was at the second one with you. I love that place! :D Oh well, see you at school.

An ocean of overwhelming violet, Petals dusted across the star sprinkled plains, Profound sapphire above our heads, Slivers of moonlight create flickering shadows, In incessant ecstasy of true friends

I liked it. I don't know why anyone would do something like that to anyone. Keep writing! :D

I don't really get the point of this poem, especially the last line. I think you need to rewrite this.