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I love this poem. It's short, but very well written. As far as I can tell it is original. I like how you presented it. Keep up the great work ...

Banned for watching A.V.P.M. or A.V.P.S.

Hello emoticon220! I like this poem, don't get me wrong, but it very similar (almost the same) to a poem my drama teacher read to me from a poetry book. ...

Banned for saying you are a century old.

I liked this poem. I can see how you don't understand it fully, but to me that seems like not understanding it made it better. That could just be me ...

Banned for being dressed in black.

The Master Plan (Adam Lambert) (Not true, I like the song and it fits in.) Where is your favourite place to be?

If you have time can you please review my poem? Thank you in advance!!!

If you have time, can you please review my poem? Thank you in advance!

This is contest entry ( ) and a poem for a science badge I''m doing on meteorology. I don't know if the punctuation is correct, if it isn't please correct ...

This is great!!! I love rainbows! :D

MaskedDragon

I love this poem! It is so original. I really only have one nitpick. After every word you put a full stop aprt from one. Tap. Tap. Scratch. Start. Strike ...

Hello sarebear, I agree with the rhyming thing halogirl4197 said. Apart from that I thought it was great. It is good to have a change from sad, heavy-hearted poems. Keep ...

I like this poem. I thought it was great apart from the fact you didn't capitalize your I's. My favourite part was this. i know that what i've experienced helped ...