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For calling us morons!

6/10

Hey guys, Thanks for the reviews. I'll fix the typo now.

Red is the apple, hanging off the tree, Orange is the chair, sitting in the corner, Yellow is the sun, shining bright in the sky, Green is the grass, swaying ...

Hey Flower Child! I like the metaphor you used in this poem, it worked well. This is a great poem. Keep up the great writing! :D

I'm not really that sure what to say. I think this is a different poem, but a good poem. Keep up the good writing! :D

I liked this poem. Just you need to use more puncuation. W ith a million things to say, my mind growing weak I think about you all the time, all ...

So true. This is such a great poem. well done and keep writing! :D

I liked this poem. Thats really all I wanted to say. Keep writing! :D

Welcome DarkVanilla, I only have one thing to say really. I loved it, I was a good poem. Keep writing! :D

6.5/10 "You're a hunter and I'm your prey now I'm lost in a love hangover I want to leave but I have to stay 'cause its voodoo, voodoo, voodoo" Voodoo ...

Hey CuteJackRussel, These pictures are great! My favourite photo is the second one, but they all look wonderful and realistic. Keep up the good work! :D

Music is happiness, Music is sadness, Music is loneliness, Music is gladness. Music is loud, Music is anything, Music is soft, Music is everything. Music is love, Music is hate, ...

Welcome to YWS CreativeXpressions, I liked this poem. Just one thing, I think you need to change the format a little, but thats just my opinion. You may have intended ...

Hey emoction! I liked this poem. It is a great poem. Keep writing! :D