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The rain hitting the roof and the keys on my keyboard as I'm typing this.

There’s nothing more relaxing Than laying on the almost-green grass Watching flowers bloom Under an early-spring sun I love doing that! Little tulip buds sway In the cool breeze About ...

I'm aiming for at least two, but hopefully more.

Hi tinkembell, I just have to say I love this poem. I don't usually like sad poems, but I love this one. That's all really. Keep writing! :D

Thanks guys. Tigersprite, I fixed the typo. Thats all it was, a typo, I didn't mean to miss-spell it.

If you have time, could you please review my poem. Thank you! :D

I like this poem and the way you translated your poem from English to Spanish. I don't know how to speak/write in Spanish but I still like it. I don't ...

This is so true! I think you could turn this into a short story, or a novel even, if you wanted to. Keep writing!:D

Maybe I write of the pain because pain is all that I feel. I just think it sounds better with "that" there, but you may not like it. Maybe I ...

I agree with the last two reviews (about the cliche parts etc.), so I won't repeat that. Wait, wait, suffer, cry, And then, finally die. I don't think you need ...

Banned for being in the prison of your mind.