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No, How could you be on YWS for too long? TUBM can play guitar.

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Thanks for the comments! I really appreciate them. tinkembell, good idea. I think I can see where you're coming from. Thanks again guys! :D

This is rather good. You did a great job with this. Just on thing, in the first and last part you rhymed every two lines like this, Things I never ...

Three of my friends kept talking about YWS so I Googled it and joined. I'm really glad I did.

Buttered popcorn, Strawberry cheesecake, And caramel corn. Pink grapefruit, Toasted marshmellow, Passion fruit. Juicy pear, Wild blackberry, Root beer. Cantaloupe (melon), Sizzling cinnamon, Watermelo

Banned for being on the same review team as me.

I love how this poem represents the truth. The repetition of the line Welcome to our society, and the rhyming makes this poem flow well. Today's society is so different ...

Hello lovethelifeulive. This is great! I really enjoyed it. Just a couple of errors (they're probably just typos, but I thought I should point them out). 10:54 it blinked in ...

Hi there! This is great and it flowed well. The message is clear (or at least it is to me). Just one thing. Stop. Start.No, too late for change I ...

I'll be there for some of it.

I just have to say I love this poem. It's just what I needed to read after a long day. Congratulations on having a fetured poem. That's all Keep up ...

No, I just find a place the books fit. TUBM likes kittens.

Banned for being in Siam.

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