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Re: A WWI solder's letter home ( I did this for Social Studies)
It was really good I liked how you made it realistic and went in the mindset of a soldir there beleifs not just "I went in a trench it was ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Why did we get on the wrong plane Part 2
‘8:45’ read Lucas's watch as he was waiting there quietly just daydreaming like he does at school. He was thinking about how crazy it would be if they got on ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Just Standing
Just write about a moment and how you are truelly feeling use some metaohors and simile's put it in versus then you have a poem I made this in 5 ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: I'm not your slave
I was thinking like Punk Rock
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: I'm not your slave
I deleted it to avoid playgerism.
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Just Standing
I stand here Microphone in my hand I see everyone looking at me curiously My worst enemy snicker's rudely Followed by the teachers dirty looks I take a deep breath ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Why did we go on the Wrong Plane Part 1
Thanks everyone the Second Part is Now is in Editing. It will be out soon. hope you like it and special thanks to my editot subhillovestowrite or the commetter right ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Why did we go on the Wrong Plane Part 1
"What all are you planning to take with you to the New york trip?"Betty asked her friend,Ashley. "I will be taking my cool dresses and camera?" Ashley replied from the ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Untitled Story (Chapter 1)
That was really good. I really like how you put it as the crash and then the girl in the hospital. I really want to find out who shot Maria ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
That sounded Depressing are you mad at anyone
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: 1 day to get out Part 1
I have deleted this in order to edit it I will put more details for a new story so this is unfortunally gone
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Prose Poetry- My Pet Rock
I think it was a very good story love the part about the fish tank in the sky. I cant beleive your teacher made you put Rocky in the Driveway. ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: My first song ever :)
I love it really got the message exciting and love the 2nd verse
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Total Drama The World Episode 1
Chris: 22 of them are but only 18 here next to this plane but on 18 will enter. Welcome to the 3rd Season. When contestents do not get a souverneer ...
Dec 5, 2009
